Imagine being afraid of dark, motorcycles, alleys and being alone for months. Imagine having flashbacks and crying like a baby for weeks. These scenarios were things I experienced ever since the fateful incident that happened on my birthday this year and had changed my life ever since then.
On 3rd January 2014, while on the way to the airport to catch the midnight flight back to Singapore, I was robbed. A motorcyclist grabbed my sling bag with all my valuables including my passport, and fled. My belongings were never recovered.
I panicked, for I had no idea if I could ever return to Singapore. At the immigration office, I cried and begged for my return even without a passport.
Back in Singapore, I had never felt so unsafe. For weeks, I was unable to get to school myself or sleep in the dark alone. I was diagnosed with Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) shortly. Frequent counselling sessions lifted my mood and taught me to treasure things in my life. I also learnt that blessings in disguise do occur.
I might had been stabbed or shot by the robber, but what I experienced was only a loss of valuables. Things could have been worse. I might still be stranded in Bali now. But I made it back to Singapore safely and lived to tell the tale. I might never have seen my family and friends, but I'm treasuring all my time spent with them now.
Hi Joan!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing with us your reflection :) It must have been terrifying for you! I hope you feel much better now.
Your reflection was good as effectively made use of made use of vivid illustrations. I could imagine you crying and being so afraid.
I also like the way you started the reflection. As you encouraged readers to imagine the whole situation, it was effective in drawing the attention of readers.
Thank you Joan :)
Diyanah
Hey Diyanah!
DeleteThank you so much for reading and encouragement!
Hey Joan!=)
ReplyDeleteI hope that you feel better now! Fortunately, the robber didn't harm you or I coundn't imagine what will happen to you!
The way you describing your experience gave me a clear image of this incidence, as if I witnessed this terrible incidence of you.
Thanks for sharing!
Love,
Jianing=)
Hey Jia Ning,
DeleteThank you for reading and for your encoragement! :D
Wow! What a trauma indeed! I can sympathize with your situation, Joan, as you explain it here. However, what might have made this even more would have been for you to 'set the stage,' explaining where you were in the first paragraph, perhaps even describing your exit from you hotel. (I don't know you were in Bali until the end of this post.)
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing! I hope you continue to get over this unfortunate event.
Dear Brad,
DeleteThank you for your reply and constructive suggestions. I would take note of this and work better for following essays! :D
Hi Joan,
ReplyDeleteThank you for willing to share this particular experience with us. It must have been traumatizing for you during that period! I am really glad you were not physically harmed!
The first 2 sentences of your reflection are really impactful and caught my attention immediately. The powerful start makes me want to continue reading your post. Also, I think that your reflection is written well as I could imagine the scenes vividly in my head when I was reading it.
The last paragraph of your reflection is also very insightful. I'm glad that you are able to look at things positively and I hope that you can get over this incident soon.
~ Xuan ~
Hey Xuan,
DeleteThank you for reading and for your encoragement! :D